Thursday, July 29, 2010

Enter Information or Slant

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Sensational/provocative [introduction/question]
1 sentence (12 words)/2 sentences (24 words) [frame/context]

A
[references] video/photograph/quote [embed/link]
sharp/mild [critique/praise]
1 sentence (12 words)[transition]

B
[references] video/photograph/quote [embed/link]
sharp/mild [critique/praise]
...

Conclusion A+B+ ... [final evaluation]
snarky/griping [question]

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©hRj 2010

Thursday, July 08, 2010

Bodies

Sometimes I think
you are just a body
who makes human noises.
A body
that climbs quietly
out of bed. A body
that eats quickly,
eats in largess
&
shits & giggles
& fucks & sleeps.

A body that is
connected
to other bodies
it calls family,
and these other bodies,
like this body,
makes human noises
& eats
& shits & giggles
& fucks & sleeps.

Sometimes I think
you are just a body
that is looking
to make me a body,
so we can
make other
small bodies
that can exist
in the society of bodies
contently
without
grief
or needing succor.

& what
is so horrible
about this?

©hRj 2010